Superduper Duplex One Room Heaven
The sun cannot set on a day
that I don’t fantasize or daydream
about what goes on in houses
when one catches my eye
my mind follows.
What kind of people live there?
Do they care they have a house,
do they think about it?
At night I dream about houses
with yards and flowers
I think about what goes on in them
I am doing laundry at my house
broken machines in laundromats forgotten
my car safe in a garage
a white picket fence.
I am jealous of the people inside houses
I know that for those people
that get to live in real houses
during their lifetimes
all must surely be divine.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2015
Shared 3/6/2020 with my friends at earthweal for open link weekend #10. I was taking a class with WordPress in 2015 and that’s where the old comments come in. I still feel this way when I see a house that catches my eye.
Oh, I do this too — thought it was just me…..
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Many people do this I’m finding out. Makes sense.
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Most of my life, I have looked at houses and imagined and envied the lives inside, as only three times in my life have I had a home of my own, two of them trailers that I loved. I didnt get to keep them long enough. I so resonate with this poem. And love the image!
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You and me both, Sherry. This was poem was a personal part of me. Thanks and have a nice weekend!
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I think sometimes a house does catch our eye and we wonder about the people inside. Houses are entry ways in many dreams. I think you have a portal of sorts to call your own.
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Yes I do! Thank you so much!
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What is it about a house that catches our eye and sweeps the imagination into it? It’s a statement of caring presence and duration and safety, instincts I think we carry from childhood or the womb. Life takes so many of those things away on our road(s), and if outsides were truly reflections of insides, then an inviting house must surely mean a happy life. For the most part, we know nothing of the ghostly inhabitants of those houses; who knows, maybe they walked by our residences yesterday or next year, wondering, who lives there? – Brendan
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So true! I like your thoughtful look on things and you’re a wonderful writer. Thank you!
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Beautiful! You put into words what most of us think when we walk past an interesting house. 🙂
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Thank you! I wrote this at a time when I was thirsty for a nicer place to live.
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whoas! you made the simple image so wonderful!
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So glad you liked it, I hope my poem was enjoyable too.
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nice read
My take : A Small Home
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting you made my day.
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Nice work, Bekkie. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by both poems are really different except the person has a warped view.
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Absolutely, and fresh clothes hanging on the line…. nice.
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Different as night and day huh Karen? Lol!
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Well written:) How did you do that? OMG the picture is so amazing. You made it move. LOL
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Just having some fun with this poem. Glad you like the animation!
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