Face Value
Tolerantly I watch your face
searching for some information
looking for the slightest change
probing for an indication
waiting for the final phase
noting every single line
when your hands point me the way
finally, I have the time.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2015
Shared for the first time from Picturesque Words.
I like the words, the theme of time, the flow and way it carries with rhythm when read silently or aloud.
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That’s what I was trying for so glad you enjoy it!
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This is intriguing and gripping. 🙂
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Nice to see you again Rose!
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Thanks, Bekkie! 😀
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I like your poem. 🙂
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Thanks so much Susan! I’ll have to read yours.
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🙂
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