The End
Hat crammed onto my head I walk
the streets. Nowhere to go now we have failed
ourselves for the last time. Elbowing through dirty
crowds of lost souls, I trip over a warm groaning body.
Sweating and feeling not unlike a corpse myself
I contemplate the glaring truth; we are all
beyond help. Finally, I spy the
park! Amazingly it’s
quiet here most
seek the
churches.
On my
bench
I sit
alone.
I can
see
the
end
from here
as I watch the mushroom cloud blossom.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2015
Shared on 3/6/2020 with my friends at dVerse~Poets Pub for Open Link Night #261. Because of the virus scare and all of the bad news recently, I decided on an old poem about The End I’ve never shared before except with a class with WordPress.
The day that it comes I just wish it would be over as quickly as possible.
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Me too!
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If our world should end like that Bekkie, I think I would like that moments peace too.
Anna :o]
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For sure!
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I like your description of an ominous ending, Bekkie.
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Nice to see you, Frank! Thank you!
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Lovely clear and effective write Bekkie – enjoyed the concrete structure as well – just u my street! I will be back for more, for sure… Regards Scott
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Thank you, Scott! I will be reading this weekend and look forward to your write.
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How nice to have some peace and quiet. Hope all is well.
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Yes it is. So far, so good and things have improved considerably thanks for asking. Big hug!
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Sometimes all we need is a place to sit and clear our mind of all that is clogging it up! A very rare thing in this day and time! Very nice!
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Thank you! So true.
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Very good
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Thanks!
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Nice.
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Sorry I missed your comment thanks so much!
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Don’t Say Sorry!!I Never Mind.
Ur Welcome.
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Very cool! I love this poem and I see the mushroom cloud. I also see a martini glass and it feels a bit like a toast to me. It does what poetry should do, stir us up inside. There could be different interpretations to your words, to me anyway. I really enjoyed it.
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Thanks you so much for telling me so Shedhippie (what a username lol!) I am glad you liked it.
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I love how you structured the poem. It perfectly mirrors a mushroom cloud. I love how the poem is about the end and yet, the “i” in the poem is really a survivor because to see the mushroom cloud is to be far enough away to survive the initial blast. So the end is really the beginning. 😉 Very clever!
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Thanks so much! The mushroom cloud wasn’t as hard to make as some of the others. You are so sweet! Hugs!
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Wow! I did not expect that! Got me! 🙂
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Lol! Got ya! What’s your name if you don’t mind?
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My name is Carol! 🙂
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Hello Carol nice to meet ya! Hugs!
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You too, dear Bekkie!
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