Her Hand
I brush back the thinning hair
studying her face.
Deep lines wrinkle as she smiles back
her watery blue eyes
still bright and beautiful.
I still lose myself in them.
I take her small hand in mine
spotted and calloused with countless tasks
a hand that matches mine.
I asked for this hand in marriage
the hand that raised our children
the hand that holds my life in it.
I lowered my lips to that hand
bestowing a tender kiss.
I whispered in her ear
to tell her how much
I will always adore that hand.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2016
Written with dVerse~Poets Pub.
SMiLes.. nothing
sweeter than
older
couples
hand iN hand..
sad.. how Mercury
can become Neptune
and Pluto
and
dArk
space
waiting
for orbit
iN HAnd..:)
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I enjoyed that thank you! What’s really sad is Pluto’s status as a planet, non-planet, then planet. Lol!
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sMiLes.. friend..
In human terms
Labels can
Come and
Go but
Essence
Remains
Unscathed..
Beyond even
human
Aided
eYes..
In Pluto
RiSinG
And
fAlling..:)
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Very touching, Bekkie! Love it ☺
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I wish I had someone like that. Maybe someday?
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Well, my granny was like that and maybe I will experience it with my husband if it’s God’s will. ☺
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I love this. Reminded me of my mother and father-in-law. They were so devoted to each other.
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Then that was true love Bodhirose how wonderful!
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We should never stopping loving “that hand”. A tender write, Bekkie. Great second effort!
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Thanks so much Walt!
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A wonderful moment.. When love lasts like that it’s beautiful
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It sure is Bjorn!
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A touching tribute to real love and commitment.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Wow..almost brought me to tears. Deep stuff. Love it.
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That is so sweet! Thank you!
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That is a very sweet gesture ~ Love the hands that remembered and cherished those memories ~
Thanks for joining us ~
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Thank you Grace, I try to write with the Pub as much as I can you have prompts that make me think and feel.
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Such a touching write 🙂
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Thanks Sanaa I found the picture and it inspired me.
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