Under The Influence
Beneath the surface
I’m buoyant
transcendent.
Moving slowly
don’t know where
I’m going.
Running together
no control
I’m overflowing.
Pellucid me
within my liquid matrix
I’m dissolving.
I’m all fluid
if you want to pour me out
just do it.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2016
Shared with Imaginary Garden Of Real Toads.
Ah, I can relate to this. 🙂
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Thank you Marian!
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Sometimes we need to be poured out, don’t we?
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Yes we do! Thank you for coming by.
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Wonderful sense of spirit in this, Bekkie!
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Thanks so much!
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The title suggests a different twist. Hope you’re not driving! I kind of assume it’s misleading, otherwise you wouldn’t be under water. Sorry I’m being so literal. If it weren’t for the title I would really groove on “pour me out.” Maybe the influence is sexual. Quite expressive whichever way it goes.
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It’s speaking to the different influences and situations we find ourselves in in life. I’m speaking in emotional terms rather than drugs. If you are under someone’s influence they have the power to “pour you out.” Thank you!
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One is helplessly floating in water that one is vulnerable. It will not be difficult for someone else to influence one’s destiny then.
Hank
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So true Hank, just like in life.
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