haibun #2717
Late in winter biking by
I heard a piercing skyward cry
I saw a large bird in the sky
an eagle looked me in the eye
I stopped a spell to watch it fly.
As I continued on my way
along the San Francisco Bay
the waters being calm that day
I watched the shorebirds interplay
stalking the waters for their prey.
the snowy egret
serves dinner
with a splash
© Rebecca Sanchez 2017
I talk, write and live bicycles because it’s made me so healthy and happy. I ride my bike from my apartment to the San Francisco Bay Trail every other day. This is an area of woods, natural harbors, wetlands, tidal pools and all the creatures that live there. I often take photos and write about them like today.
The photographs (3 frames) were taken by James Graham (my roommate) and animated by me.
Written with dVerse~Poets Pub for Haibun Monday and shared with Imaginary Garden Of Real Toads for The Tuesday Platform. I see no reason why a haibun can’t rhyme, is there one?
Thank you again, Mick!
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Your haibun inspired a haiku comment{
a rhyming haibun
reflecting nature
San Francisco Bay
birds acting
feeding fishing natures way
captured camera views
little egret
yellow feet snowy white plumes
a natural angler
I liked a lot
picture haibun haiku too
perceived perfection
Will be post this to my blog, watch out for a pingback – Mick
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Thank you so much, Mick! I enjoyed your haibun comment very much it made my day! Hugs!
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M pleasure..
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I will most likely never see the San Francisco Bay Trail. Thank you for taking me there!
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Your welcome, Bev. I’d like to take everyone on a bike ride with me!
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The San Francisco bay sounds so idyllic
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It really is! Makes me go back time after time.
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How lucky you are to be able to describe San Francisco first hand… I can only dream of it.
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I feel lucky, indeed, Kerry!
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I enjoyed the rhymes 🙂
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Glad you did!
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A wonderful closing haiku and this bike trail sounds amazing ☺
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Thank you so much! I’d love to show it to you.
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Thank you! :o) xxx
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Love how you can find a bike road like that
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I can only imagine how beautiful it is biking in your country!
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Oh, I like this. Sure wish I could live by bicycle, by the bay 🙂
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I almost literally lived on the Bay on my bike. My roommate and I just got over some hard financial times. Thank heavens we are doing better and I can joke about it. Love to take you riding with me some day.
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Very realistic images right on the spot. How nice to enjoying the scenic beauty of the Bay area Bekkie!
Hank
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Glad you liked it, Hank! I like sharing it as much as I can.
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Nice rhyme and meter. I liked the images. It makes me want to try animating some images myself using one of those google photo apps.
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The Google Photos Auto Awesome (look it up) works really well but if you want special effects try: http://www167.lunapic.com it’s what I use for my kaleidoscopes. Thanks for your kind critique, Frank!
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