Cake
I was told there would be cake
a delicious flavor just for me
yet I grow tired of lingering
I’m crumbling into pieces
my life stale and tasteless.
I was told there would be cake
yet I find no sweet treat today
my kitchen sits spotless awaiting
the glorious gooey sticky mess.
Will I ever find that recipe again?
I was told there would be cake
as the years go by the craving grows
sitting alone at a table set for one
wondering if I’ll be left
holding an empty plate.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2017
Picking a protest sign to write about linking with Imaginary Garden Of Real Toads. Divorced twice with no children I still dream of finding that special man to share the rest of my life with. That would take the cake and be sweet indeed.
Clever write and I do hope you find that recipe again! I’m sure he is out there, just waiting to share cake!
Anna :o]
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I hope so, I really hope so! Lol!
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I hope she smashes the plate (or takes it home) and makes something she can enjoy, even cake.
The repetition is so effective here. We can feel her disappointment grow, until she has nothing but emptiness.
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That is so like you, Magaly! Lol! Maybe I should smash that plate.
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I like this Bekkie. Thank you for the background. I was single for three years and wasn’t looking for a wife when Mrs. Jim found me. Now we’ve been married for 44 years. My Mom told me a lot, “You won’t find a nice girl in a bar.” I am not sure why she told me that. But anyway, that isn’t always true, especially with all the time passing since she last told me.
I am glad that you used that sign, I had found it but you did sooo very good I would have had to hang my head and write another (I’m not real proud of what I did but it’s on the calendar, Number 12).
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Was that a hint to look in bars, Jim? Lol! I’m so happy you did find Mrs. Jim. I just got time to read today on Easter Sunday so I haven’t got to yours yet but after this I’m reading them all.
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I love how this almost echoes a modern Marie Antoinette….clever and fun. Thanks for posting to the Out of Standard!
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I didn’t have time to read but today’s the day! Thanks, Isadora it was fun as always with the Toads!
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I can’t help thinking, ‘Oh honey, go make your own cake!’ but I am not quite sure how that translates into real life. Maybe via emilie’s suggestion? And/or a bit of magic: write down everything you want in a man. Don’t leave anything important out, e.g. age-group, politics, geographical location…. Then read it through; then file it away in the back of a drawer and try to forget about it, trusting that the Universe will now go to work to manifest your dream man. If you are a bit thick about picking up clues, like me, add to the list what you are to be given as a sign, when he turns up, that this is The One. (You get to decide what sign will work for you. Make it within the realms of possibility, but not so common you could dismiss its significance.)
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I like that! Although I’m not much of a witch I dabble in Tarot cards, spells, rocks for healing and more. I like the New Age stuff. I am really going to do this and I’ll let you know how it turns out.
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I’m singing McCarthur Park to this one. There will be cake. 🙂
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You got that line didn’t you? Good for you! That song was in my head the whole time writing it. Lol!
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Perfect sign as a prompt for the perfect poem. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Frank! I thought so too, I did an image search and looked at a few before picking it. It was a clever prompt.
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Ha! I love this! There should definitely be more cake in life!
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Thanks! Do you have any single friends? Lol!
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The ending is so sad, but well written.
So I find that very intriguing … a cake flavor that exists just for you. What would it taste like? What combinations of flavors/toppings/decorations would you mix together to get your own unique recipe?
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I think maybe I disguised the fact that I’m waiting for a man in my poem too well. Lol! The flavor just for me would be the right man when, or if he comes along. A man around my age, good looking, kind and in shape would be enough for me. Thank you, Emile, for your sweet comment.
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Oh, no. You didn’t; I definitely got it. I was just wondering about the cake too. 🙂
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I met my husband on eharmony.com; our 13th wedding anniversary is tomorrow. You could give that a try …
You’re very beautiful, by the way.
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I thought about doing just that! I’ve heard good things about it. Glad it turned out for you! Thanks, Emile!
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So sad but lovely
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Thank you! I hope there’s a happy ending in there some day.
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