The Boom Boom Boom
I feel the bass
############EXPLODING
through my body
###############with the boom
#########boom
###############boom.
As the electric guitar
##################SCREAMS
#######over the notes
of the opening song.
The music SMELLS
#####like an alleyway
in San Francisco
####where you get a BUZZ
########just by passing by.
The people stand
#####in lines
############waiting
at the venue
and the music
#############SPILLS
#################outside
into the streets.
So
#####singular
and beautiful
############the notes
#####as they CASCADE
###############down.
Bouncing
#########off the buildings
with the bass
############EXPLODING
########with the boom
##boom
########boom.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2013
Photography by Lorenzo Montezemolo. An old poem I wrote about a place I used to live and love shared with my friends at Poets United.
A poem that deserves to be read aloud with feeling!
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Thank you so much! I don’t know why but I had to fish you outta spam.
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I love this idea of the music having a SMELL!!
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Thank you, CC!
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Now I feel it too!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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Beauty! I can hear and feel the bass booming ☺♥
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Thank you, Phil! Hugs!
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I feel like it’s coming my way like a tsunami of boom!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Ditto – would love to be near that alleyway 🙂
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I hear you loud and clear, Jae. Thank you!
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Often we associate music with the first place we heard it and we recall those senses ever after.
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Thank you, Oldegg!
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Bouncing off the buildings
with the bass EXPLODING
Thre’s so much energy accentuating in movements in this poem, Bekkie! One feels like floating all along in lots of goodness!
Hank
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You just might after passing by that alleyway, Hank. Lol!
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The music SMELLS
like an alleyway… that’s wonderfully written!
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That’s so kind of you, thanks for leaving your thots.
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Ah, I have experienced this as well. The music is overwhelming, and that is all that exists for a time….. There is something to be said, isn’t there, for this kind of escape!!
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There sure is, Mary! As I’m getting older I don’t get to experience like I used to. Lol!
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This is so wonderfully rhythmic! The beat is absolutely palpable 😀
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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This is awesome.
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Glad you liked it, Shawna!
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I can feel the boom boom boom of the pounding beat, feel the energy of the music. Great photo accompaniment as well.
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Thank you, Sherry! You never got back to my email asking for Mary’s email so I can send her some of my photos. As you probably noticed I haven’t been writing for a few weeks. Got caught up in bike riding and other things but I’m coming back.
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