haiku #123117
an autumn leaf
making way for fresh spring growth
falls, with a flourish
© Rebecca Sanchez 2017
This is what I used to make my artwork (part of a larger photograph I took.) I caught a leaf falling, not only that, but it had a hole in it I could see through. It was suspended there just for my camera. I think it’s magic catching something like this while it’s happening. Perfect for this prompt and the last day of 2017. Happy New Year!
Written with Haiku Horizons (my last poem of 2017) for the prompt fresh. Shared with Poets United also.
i liked this idea of renewal. certainly the world needs loads of it as the state it is in.
loved the artwork, your re-imaging of the photo. very artful, interesting colors. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Dsnakei! You are so kind.
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O! to fall with a flourish!
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That’s right! Lol! Thanks, Susan!
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Love this perfect moment of promise, the spring that grows from the fall… Just lovely.
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Thank you so much, Magaly! Hugs!
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Lovely to see the steps of your creation, each beautiful in itself.
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Thank you, Rosemary! I did a whole group of these for an animation but I didn’t get it done yet.
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Beautiful photo and haiku, Bekkie. Happy New Year!
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Happy New Year my friend!
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You know, I forgot your real name again. I’m so sorry, but I want to read your poem on PU.
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Gorgeous!❤️
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Thank you, Sana!
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A beautiful message indeed.
Anna :o]
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Yes, it is. Thank you, Anna!
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Your art work is lovely. Happy New Year.
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Thank you, Rall! Have a good year!
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You make your writing work in so many ways by showing both the prompt and your development of the idea. Very well done indeed.
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Thank you, Oldegg! Maybe I’ll show my work more often. I thought it bored people.
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Aah…’falls with a flourish’ such gorgeous image! beautiful Bekkie….
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Thank you, Sumana! It fits well doesn’t it? I changed the second line a little, I’m always so awkward with my haiku.
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So beautiful, haiku, photo and photo art. Very cool.
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Thank you, Sherry! Hugs!
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I love this poem for the year’s end!
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Thank you so much, Donna!
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A lovely haiku.
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Thank you so much!
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A beautiful message as one year ends and another begins!! Bring on those fresh new buds.
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I changed it to “making way for fresh spring growth.” I often go back and tweak a few words. Do you ever?
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