The Dark Path
The unknown
a new way beckons
just one step
phantoms cling
they follow and won’t let go
the dark path takes me.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2018
Artwork from a Google image search.
Today the prompt at dVerse~Poets Pub is to write a shadorma, a poem with one stanza or more, each stanza containing 6 lines with a 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable count.
What makes one survive a “dark path” and others give in? either way it is a scary time.
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Something, I think we’ve all encountered. Thank you, Margaret!
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Truly sinister!
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Thank you!
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Reminds me of that line that the death speaks in the seventh seal:
I have walked beside you for long time.
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Yes!
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Hmmm – this makes me think of how we fight against change, against the ‘new way.’ We see it as dark and sinister because we resist it. I read this as a positive step taken in hesitation.
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I like your read it’s true. Sometimes the dark paths bring forth light.
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Such a beautiful write, about the dark path. This has happened to me.
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I think it’s happened to many, kind of like the human condition. Lol!
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Nicely eerie.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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I love the fatalistic finish of your poem.
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight!
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So spooky! I can almost see the phantoms.
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Oh no! Run, Vivian!
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Gone already!
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It’s those dark paths that make me wish I brought a flashlight. Nice mood setting poem.
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Thank you, Frank!
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The clinging phantoms would be my clue to turn back, but, even as i write that I hear the voice of truth saying, “No, you didn’t. You went on ahead for a long ways letting them consume you, in search of the ever elusive unknown.”
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Lol! We really don’t know, do we?
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A true ghostly one.
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Boo! Thank you, Jane!
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🙂
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