Enigmatic Me
Forever is a long time
tomorrow never comes
yesterday is so far away
I waste my time
and that’s a crime.
Destiny goes unfulfilled
the shape of things to come
the lottery is never won
fate knows the score
forevermore.
My lifeline tells me nota
my fortune can’t be rushed
good things take time
to ascertain
so an enigma I’ll remain.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2018
nota=slang for nothing
My life remains a puzzle slowly coming together with pieces bent and missing that may be lost for good. How would I know?
Sharing a poem of choice with my friends at Poets United.
Love this 🙂
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Thank you and sorry I’m so late at replying!
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Hahahahahaaa don’t worry, I do the same 🙂
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As someone (George Bernard Shaw???) once said, ‘Life can only be understood backwards. The trouble is, it has to be lived forwards.’
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I just love that, Rosemary! Such a drag! ~giggle~
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I like a little uncertainty – but only sometimes…
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna! Sorry I’m answering late I took some time off writing.
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I confess to being a time-waster too. Criminal!
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They should lock us away and throw away the key! Lol!
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Lovely. ❤☺🌹
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Thank you! Hugs!
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You are Welcome.
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An enigma…perhaps….
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Thanks! I think so too.
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Soo lovely!💜 I like “so an enigma I’ll remain” better 😊
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Thanks for your input, Sanaa!
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Prefer the use of enigma… usually as a rules of thumb nouns and verbs are stronger than adjectives.
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Thanks for your critique, Bjorn!
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Let’s be the driving source ourselves and thumb out noses at fate.
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Sounds good!
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Hmmmm…..not sure, but possibly I like “an enigma I’ll remain” slightly more. Both work well. I’ve been waiting so long I am turning into stone, lol. (Just kidding!)
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I hear you! Lol!
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Ha! I’m waiting too 🙂
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Good for you, ZQ! Be reading yours soon.
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