Different
We’re different it’s plain to see
if you say why I say I don’t know
I say it’s you, you say it’s me
if I say stay then you just go.
If I see you and say hello
you look at me and say goodbye
if I say high, then you say low
all I can ask is why, oh why?
I tell you yes, you say oh no
why must it always be this way?
When I say fast then you go slow
I say good-night you say good-day.
I don’t know why you say goodbye
our conversations make me cry.
© Rebecca Sanchez 2017
Writing an English pop sonnet based on a popular song from my past with dVerse~Poets Pub. This band was very popular in the 60’s and I’d like you to guess but the answer is here. The artwork is one of my animations untitled.
Great piece, Bekkie! 🙂
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Thank you! This was so much fun.
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Love that Beatles song. Great sonnet!
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Thank you!
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Hello, Bekkie! 😉 Glad you joined in – this was fun to read!
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So happy I did too, it was such fun guessing them!
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Paul and the boys for sure! Very effective.
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Thank you, Charley! I finally got to read everyone’s sonnet’s today. What fun!
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Great sonnet!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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This must be the Beatles. A good choice for getting a sonnet out of it.
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Thank you, Jane! It seems simple compared to the ones I read today but it was fun.
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I only got the Beatles ones I think. Most lyrics just don’t stick.
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When disguised as sonnets there were some I could not guess! Thanks, Jane!
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Wow, well done! I see people have already guessed the Beatles which is what I was leaning towards as well.
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Hello, goodbye! Thanks, Jade.
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hello, hello ~ we are in different places, so its hard to see, ha ~ thanks for joining us bekkie and happy easter !
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Happy Easter to you, Grace! Thank you! I just finished reading everyone’s sonnets today and what fun it was.
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Beatles. Hello hello……..
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Thank you, Paul and you got it!
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I agree with Frank. Definitely The Beatles, Bekkie! That’s a great rhyming couplet at the end and I love the animation!
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Thank you, Kim! Glad you liked my work!
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My guess: The Beatles, “Hello, Goodbye”. I see you can write a sonnet!
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You know what’s funny, Frank? After looking sonnet’s up it occurred to me that I already have used this same rhyming scheme in my work I just didn’t know it. Lol! I really enjoyed this prompt and was surprised that so many didn’t write! I just got done reading them all and it was great fun. Happy Easter!
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Why must it be different most times.? There have to be elements of wanting to make things easier to move.
Hank
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So true, Hank! Thank you!
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