haiku #91116 a
as autumn charms
cold winds send summer scattering
’round the bend
© Rebecca Sanchez 2016
haiku #91116 b
911
a hole in our hearts
still on the mend
© Rebecca Sanchez 2016
bend and mend (2 weeks of prompts)
Written with Haiku Horizons and shared with Poets United.
A clever use of round the bend – Autumn can certainly test us for a variety of reasons
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Thank you, Jae. I am always sad to see spring/summer over with they are my favorite times of the year, but these’s good things to be said for fall/winter.
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This paints an absolutely beautiful picture – i like the thought of “summer scattering”!
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Lol! Summer never got the foot in the door in San Mateo this year, maybe next?
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Bekki, I always luv your animations and these no doubt, no less. Thanks for those poignant haiku reminders of 9/11
That hole you spoke of, the world shares and as Magaly said even in tryin to fill it with worth, we do need to remember ; how it got holed in the first place
much love…
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I think there will always be something there to remind us how 911 happened. Thank you so much Gillena!
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I think I just had an epileptic seizure.
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So sorry J.
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some tears never mend.
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That is so true. Thank you!
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picturesque
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Thank you!
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I love the first haiku, for I’m a sucker for anything that tells of Nature’s brilliance. I see summer turning the corner to the beat of your poem.
The second piece poses such a difficult question… I don’t think that whole can be mended. I don’t think it should. Perhaps, we should fill it with wonderful lessons and better things… while never forgetting how it came to be holed.
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We shouldn’t forget how it happened so that it never happens again! Thank you so much Magaly!
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poignant…
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Thank you!
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Wonderful haiku, Bekkie.
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Thank you Sherry! Hugs!
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‘A hole in our hearts still on the mend’ certainly speaks to my mood today!
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Thank you for telling me so Mary!
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That hole… I wonder if it can be mended.
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A very good question Bjorn, can it be answered?
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